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Here's the draft info for the alien races humans are most likely to interact with on Aethos.
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It burns! It burns like hygiene!
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Quick skim, looking good. As to interesting places, I'm certainly hoping to see maps of the Aethos. Putting it in such company would seem logical.
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Redesigning character sheets since 1996.
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There will certainly be a map of the polygon and the adjacent ones, but an overall map will probably be in the form of a general illustration rather than a detailed map of something 25 times the area of Earth...
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It burns! It burns like hygiene!
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...oh, fine then.
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Redesigning character sheets since 1996.
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I like the aliens on Aethos generally, but one thing: Could you change the name of the cartoo? It just sounds and looks like "cartoon" with the n missing. Even "Bartoo" would sound better.
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I am Death. Death the Avenger, purger of sins. Death the Merciful, purifier of souls. Those who considered me gone, think again, Those who laughed and mocked me, be afraid. I am returned, and this time Judgement will not be denied, for my name is Death, and I have come to Judge you.
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Nah, I like Cartoo.
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It burns! It burns like hygiene!
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Well, if you want to use that name could you at least change ths spelling so it doesn't look like a typo for cartoon?
"Khartu" sounds the same but the spelling looks more exotic. |
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I am Death. Death the Avenger, purger of sins. Death the Merciful, purifier of souls. Those who considered me gone, think again, Those who laughed and mocked me, be afraid. I am returned, and this time Judgement will not be denied, for my name is Death, and I have come to Judge you.
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